New start: Original Instrumental/Lyrics

Okay, new start! Here's the plan! I make music and I want to share it. I write songs and I want opinions. So here's how it's going to work...

1. I'll post a MIDI instrumental on here for every week until Christmas and I want honest opinions.

2. Every month, I'll have lyrics posted on here. I've written over 150 songs and even though my lyrics outweigh my instrumentals, I don't want to spread the love too much (if you know what I mean!)

3. When I finally get down to recording some of my material, I'll share it here, too! I only have two recorded songs, but I'll post the one I want you to hear tonight!

...and, if I really want to share, I'll talk about certain news that appeals to me, whether it be music, or stupid crap happening to celebs and our world.

So here is my official start...

ORIGINAL INSTRUMENTAL:

...made this over a year ago.

Tell Me

First Verse:

I remember another time when you were just another girl

And I couldn't believe that you fell in love with a guy like me

Now I'm thinking, "I was stupid, can't believe that I went through this"

Guess I didn't think this through and now I regret everything

You changed, I changed, but my heart stayed the same

Yours went a different way, tell me was I to blame

Tell me, what did I do to deserve this pain?

Tell me was this all a a game, what can you tell me?

Chorus:

(Tell me what I did) 'cause when we fight, then no one's right and we end up with sleepless nights

(Tell me what I did) What the hell did I do to deserve a broken heart?

(Tell me what I did) 'Cause I can't go on in this relationship when we're both at fault

(Tell me what I did) What did I do to break us all apart?

Second Verse:

(See these changes) they can't keep coming

'Cause they keep passing me by in a blink of an eye

Can you tell me why do we have to go on with this charade?

Isn't it enough that this is a game I've played?

So let's say that we're in love again

What's the point if it's not true between us, then?

How can we go on with what's gone and what has been?

Something's telling me we shouldn't be, so tell me...

Repeat Chorus

Third Verse:

I remember another time

I was yours and you were mine

I remember another girl

Greatest in the whole world

I remember another time

When it was just you and I

I remember another girl

What happened to that other girl?

Repeat Chorus twice

Tell me what I did...